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richardfletcher
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Joined: 15 May 2002 Member #: 2,202 Posts: 4 Location: Bolton (United Kingdom)
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Finne Phynn DJ's Assistant
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It's quite good. I like the synths u've used. There's a very professional sound to it. The melody is very nice, and original. Good tune!
May I ask what equipment/software you've used for this track?
P.S. I assume you left out the intro and outro on purpose? Cuz it would be more DJ-friendly if you had an intro/outro
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Posted: Wed May 22, 2002 7:43 am |
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Lightworks Wim Ruling the Dancefloor
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Joined: 11 Nov 2001 Member #: 691 Posts: 237 Location: Kessel-Lo, Belgium
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seems like a godo track
the only thing i missed was a little variety, the track has only one melody... but the rest seems quite ok, good balance in the percussion and a good synth melody.
cheers!
LW
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Posted: Wed May 22, 2002 9:47 am |
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Ami
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ooh what have we here, another commendable track
what is most striking, is your synths, they sound damn, good sharp and vibrant,
hmm, its nicely gets going to the main synth melody, and then the keeping the melody going is excellant, but theres 1 thing i noticed, its probably because you've mentioned that the volume levels are too high, is that when the synths are going they sound like there one a repeating loop, its like its goes full whack then after tiny intermission , it winds down slightly for a bit, then very quickly back up, then winds down, (like its being ramped up and down quickly) in addition the main melody is kinda drowing out any background layers, theres sum nice buildups in there
maybe you could build up the background beat melody up along with the main melody, like get the beats going faster and faster and the main melody changing in line with it, as it kinda seems to me, that the background beat is constant (monotonous) and just the main melody changing, or at times the oposite, the background beat changing but the main synth melody is becoming monotonous..
take for example Cygnus X - Orange Theme, that has a beat that is distinct from main melody and changing, but works with main melody,
i dunno, hehe. just my observations, im not downhartely critizing your track, rather trying to come up with maybe useful constructive points
for sum reason, this track to me, gives me the impresion that if driven harder and faster (could make a nice remix)
anyways like you says its a demo, and still a work in progress, none the less it shows promise.
as for it being released, all the best! hopefully, its a sucess, and your hard efforts pay off, all the best
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Posted: Thu May 23, 2002 6:02 am |
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